This shows Francesca's real ability to connect with the text despite its complexity.
It is clear, easy to read, honest and direct, with a transparent movement back-and-forth from the text to the subjective emotions and thoughts of the writer.
COMMENT: refer to this work specifically and identify the aspect of her technique that allows her to create this outcome. What can you do to achieve the same clarity and terseness?
TASK 2: Pages 1-17
-Geremio is working with concrete, surrounded by many men.
-Geremio is married to Annunziata. He has children and they
recently bought their own house.
-Annunziata notices he doesn’t speak about his job often,
she assumes it is dangerous. (She is right). GREAT OBSERVATION; FORESHADOWING
-It is good Friday, 1 hour before they are free for the
weekend to celebrate Easter.
-The building collapses and he is crushed. He seems to be
dying.
-His friend is faceless and dead above him.
-Geremio screams for help but it does not do much for him.
-Geremio eventually dies after many screams for Jesus, the
blessed mother, etc.
TASK 3: There must be a reason we were assigned only 17
pages. The reason must be because the book opens on a crucial scene filled with
a ton of information. We meet a character, his family, what he does for a
living, the guys he is surrounded with and we even read his death. This book is
also a tough read, if we take it slowly at first we can develop a technique
when reading the rest. THAT IS THE REAL POINT OF THE SHORT ASSIGNMENT, TO GIVE YOU TIME TO FIND YOUR OWN RHYTHM Reading too much right away could cause us to rush and
miss important information.
TASK 4:
1) I believe there is enough material in this chapter to
write a whole page on feelings and reactions. If pictures are worth a thousand
words, then a chapter is worth a billion words. NICELY SAID
In regards to chapter 1 of Christ
in Concrete, we are introduced to a vast amount of information almost right
away. We learn about Geremio, his family, where he works and whom he works
with. We also learn that his job is pretty dangerous, he is hard working and
that he is looking forward to going home for the holiday weekend to spend time
with his kids. Not to mention that he is a father with a new home. We can speak
about the irony that just before he dies his wife asks about the danger of his
job. We can also speak about how he dies on Good Friday, the same day Jesus
Christ dies. As he dies he is calling out to his creator. SYMBOLISM This can foreshadow
the title of the book; a worker dying in concrete on Good Friday.
2) Like I spoke about earlier in this assignment, the
character of Geremio made me feel like I was reading about my father. I am sure
that this reminds many people of their fathers.
THIS IS AN EXAMPLE OF "MULTIPLE PLANE" WRITING: I
N TWO BRIEF SENTENCES:
THE TEXT,
THE CONNECTION TEXT-WRITER,
THE CONNECTION OF THE WRITER TO HER INNER WORLD (FATHER);
THE WRITER'S CONNECTION TO THE WIDER WORLD.
(HOW DO I FEEL IS THE WAY THE REST OF THE WORLD ALSO FEELS, BECAUSE WE BELONG TO THE SAME MORAL UNIVERSE)
These pages made me feel a bit
heartbroken. Geremio is a young man who died too soon. As I was reading the
book I almost wanted to say out loud, “Wait, that’s not fair!”
SMOOTH SWING BETWEEN EMOTION AND REACTION
I am not sure
why his death resonated with me so much. LOOKING INSIDE
Especially since I only knew him for
17 pages. I have a special place in my heart for fathers. DEEPER INSIDE
I am the textbook
definition of a “daddy’s girl” (being the only daughter in my family). LOOKING AT THE BIGGER PICTURE
I have
never experienced a death such as this first hand, but my mother has. EVEN BIGGER
A train
crushed my grandfather (a German immigrant) when my mother was very young. I
can only imagine that his death was similar to Geremio’s. EVEN BIGGER: MEMORIES RECEIVED FROM OTHERS THAT DEFINE THE DEEP LAYERS OF PERSONALITY
Besides sad, the book
made me a very intrigued. BACK TO THE BRAIN
Despite the level of difficulty, it is extremely
interesting. BRAIN POWER I have no problem reading it. I can only predict that it will
improve my reading abilities and help my writing while telling me an incredible
story. EXPECTATION (because, no matter what, we are all yearning for the future.)
